Car Crash
“Mum, how long till we get to the beach” I asked as we zipped
along the highway. “ 20 Minutes “ she replied with an annoyed
tone. I look out the window to see mountains, and in the distance
I spot the beautiful blue water glistening in the sunshine. We
drive up the mountain and through the winding road at a slow speed. We finally get past the winding road and begin our descent towards the coromandel. We reach the bottom of the mountain and drive towards the beach. We were moving very fast when a car drives into our hood. Crash!!!
along the highway. “ 20 Minutes “ she replied with an annoyed
tone. I look out the window to see mountains, and in the distance
I spot the beautiful blue water glistening in the sunshine. We
drive up the mountain and through the winding road at a slow speed. We finally get past the winding road and begin our descent towards the coromandel. We reach the bottom of the mountain and drive towards the beach. We were moving very fast when a car drives into our hood. Crash!!!
You have worked on creating an image through your chose of adjectives and precise verbs e.g beautiful, blue, glistening. Continue to do this. I look forward to reading your next post.
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